Analysis of The Grass Dancers



The Grass Dancer

As moonlight shimmered upon the grass

And stars glistened the dark

The drums and the singers began

I watched him walk into the arena

His feet moving to the beat of the drum

The fringe on his regalia

Flowed outward in the breeze

His face raised to the moon

A hint of a smile upon his lips

Eyes shining like fire light

He danced dipping high and low

Twirling and whirling round and round

One leg in the air the other stepping down

Does his feet not feel the wet grassy earth?

He dances unaware others are watching

I take a drink of water to wet my parched dry lips

As I sit and watch with awe and wonder

Soon what was one in the circle grew

As other men silently joined in

They danced in a  circle

Lifting themselves high

Letting no dust gather under their feet

I watch as my heart pounded in my chest

My breath came faster with each of their steps

My mind began spinning around with them

Then the drums and the singing came to an end

Their feet now stood firm on the land.


Scheme A X X X B X B X X C X X X X X X C A X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 0110 11100101 011001 01001001 1111010010 1110101101 0111010 110001 111101 011010111 1101101 1110101 10010101 11001010101 1111101101 1100110110 1101110111111 1110111010 111100101 110110010 110010 10011 1011101011 1111110011 1111011111 1101100111 10100101111 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,017
Words 224
Sentences 2
Stanzas 28
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 28
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Written on September 28, 2005

Submitted by Georgia51 on May 20, 2022

Modified on March 14, 2023

1:07 min read
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Georgia Gill-Elkins

Started writing as a challenge back in 1998, and just kept writing. more…

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