Analysis of The Mist Of The Mirror Soldier Man



As I dream I can hear you.             
You are calling me.
Where I can't see you.
As I keep hearing you.
I follow your voice.
Your voice lead me to a house.
When I walked in.
I see all the candle lite in the house.
As I kept on walking.
I turn,there you were.
I see you in the mirror.
I put my hand on the mirror.
You put your hand on the other side of the mirror.
I grab your hand thru the mirror.
That's when i see that you were a mist.
You walk thru the mirror.
You looked in my eyes and you grab me.
Then you took me in your arm's.
Then you slowly kissing my lips.
You whisper to me saying that tou loved me.
I looked up at you.
You told me that you want to stay with me.
But you were a mist.
You started to cry.
But I couldn't wiped the tears from you.
I wanted to be with you.
But you told me that tome will tell at the end.
You let me go,so you can go back into the mirror.
You told me that you will wait right here for me.
So I let you go.                                      


Scheme ABAACDEDFGGGGGHGBIJBABHKAALGBM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (23%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 1111111 11101 11111 111101 11011 1111101 1110 1110101001 111110 1110 1110010 11111010 1111101011010 11111010 111111001 111010 110110111 1111011 11101011 11011101111 11111 1111111111 11001 11011 111010111 1101111 11111111101 1111111101010 11111111111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 986
Words 237
Sentences 31
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 694
Words per stanza (avg) 206
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Submitted by Sunshinepanda40 on June 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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