Analysis of Cries of a loving heart



I feel that rare feeling
The one that is so odd
The one that makes me feel old
It shines to me so bright like gold

I hope that you see
How i can afford
To you it may seem as a fraud

But i pray that you see
That it is no joke
You'll open your eyes and see,
For you what i hope

As time flies
you ignore my cries
For i behave as a child
But i will have to fight

Fight for the one
The one and only one
The one that i want

Am ready for the chase
So i can confirm my place
And now it's a bet
I'll do it just for your sake
I know you'll see its not for games


Scheme XXAA BXX BXBX CCXX DDX EEXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 011111 0111111 11111111 11111 11101 11111101 111111 11111 1101101 11111 111 10111 1101101 111111 1101 010101 01111 110101 1110111 01101 1111111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 560
Words 139
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 3, 5
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

The inspiration to write this poem was got from my personal experience for a person that i loved and seemed to not notice it.

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Written on July 10, 2022

Submitted by Ndahipadamz on July 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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