Analysis of Mom's Wisdom



When you told me to think positively.
It was only words, not something I truly heard
Then when negative thoughts did not allow good to come through,
I just thought of your words to be true.
How my negative thoughts would affect what
Would come through.
That is a factm
That is so true.
When truly believes in Jesus and God,
The aura of positive belief is the outcome.
The positive  that happened was not of a negative thought.
If I have a thought that is positive
It is the good aura Of this which I could give.
It is not of negative that provides the force to live.
but only of the hopeful serene and positive .
The energy to think positively that I generated ,
Can make my wish be created
 Financial security and peace of mind
Can be achieved if God is ready.
Dorothy Rose Forgione
Tribute to Mom
July 28 2022


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Characters 814
Words 167
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 641
Words per stanza (avg) 156

About this poem

This poem is a tribute to my mother who has wisdom to to intuite people well and convey her opinion on them and bravery in facing challenges in her life.

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Written on July 28, 2022

Submitted by Dorothyrose1218 on July 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dorothy Rose Forgione

I am a licensed therapist in mental health and addiction and couples in private practice and hypnotherapist. I am in this work twenty years and an altruistic person as this work is a calling. I gain fulfillment in creating positive change in my clients. I enjoy pool, ping pong and bowling and am a night owl, feel best late at night. I write poems for others who affected my life. I must write the poem when the thought comes to me. more…

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