Analysis of The pain of my past



The pain of my past weighs heavy on my mind and I don't know how to find my way out, I'm full of doubt about my future, I fear history will repeat itself and I will be abandoned yet again by everyone I come to know and love and no one will give me the love I crave and deserve, somehow my life has hit a curve leaving me without the nerve to let go of the past and not allowing me to grasp what my life could be if just trust that feeling I have about her and let her be the one who take me out of the darkness and lead me to true and honest love, the kind that keep me grounded and surrounded by all the things I love, is she the one who God sent for me to love or will she hurt and abandon me like all thee above or will she conquer my heart like a pure white dove and wipe all the doubt out my mind and become my greatest find.


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About this poem

This poem is about someone who has experienced so much pain in his past and when he find the one true love the pain from his past blocks him from believing he could have met the one

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Written on July 26, 2022

Submitted by Deedee324 on July 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Debra Fabien

Born and raised in Newark New Jersey, Married and have 2 sons ages 36 & 40, I moved to Durham NC in February 2021 more…

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