Analysis of Age 18

Aditiiii 2004 (Haryana)



When I was young I was free

There were no worries to see

What I have was carefree me

I had a happy me

All time doing silly things

No responsibilities... No nothing

Adolescence- it hit me one day

With infinite emotions, curiosity all on my way

Harmonal changes started occuring

Guys are seem to be attracting

There comes the wrong turns we take

But there only we learn from our mistake

Now comes number of distraction

Also pressure of scoring good marks in addition

No one is aware about my stress and me

That how these fucking career choices confusing me

One side is me dreaming about bright future

Other side is same me scared about my future

Whether pursuing this would be a regret

Or it is going to be great

18,comes with transition from youth to adult

All this shit sucks

It comes with expectations of parents from me

And me expecting that now I would be free

Ending this up saying,

I am enjoying last few days of my teen

Excited to be an adult as I am turning freaking 18(eighteen)


Scheme A A A A X B C C B B D D E E A A F F X X X X A A B G G
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1011011 111111 110101 1110101 100100110 01011111 110001001001111 11010010 11111010 1101111 11101111001 11101010 1010110110010 11101011101 1111001100101 11111001110 101111101110 10010111001 11110111 1101011101 1111 11101011011 01010111111 101110 11010111111 01011101111101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,013
Words 213
Sentences 2
Stanzas 27
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

About life of a teenager

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Submitted by aditig.81147 on August 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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