Analysis of Circles
There are days that I don’t .
don’t see the point of it all.
enclosed in my own world
filled with so much loneliness
I wonder why I was made
to feel so small
There are mornings
I swap faces
with all the emotions folded into my drawers
I can be the bottled hero
or sobbing the villian
I know how to choose my own downfall
Happiness tastes delicious with regret
but that only happens at night
when the monsters of my moments
stay whispering
causing thunder over my thoughts
pouring droplets to soak my mind
Sunrise stretches through my childhood
reminding me of the horrors I lived through
abandonment raised me as a baby
Insecurity kept me humbled into my youth
I often fear the feeling
of being forgotten
so I colour myself in fluorescent greens
and blues
the attention isn’t always from the best
but it’s all mine to choose
I become distant at 2 o’clock
convince myself
that I cannot buy love
with what I have within
I’m meant to give it
not get it
but that’s when the moonlight comes in…
I bask all night
in its arms
it’s touch makes me feel
so seen
every word
every lie
every tale
are the sweetest words it could ever sing
because I know the moon could never leave me
I fulfil all his fantasies
At midnight
I hear
the call of the void
I break into myself
and retreat
My my look at all I’ve done
…I can’t run
shame grabs hold of my feet
pulls me through the surface
back into my miniature world
put to defeat .
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111 1101111 010111 1111100 1101111 1111 1110 1110 110010100111 11101010 11001 11111111 1001010101 11101011 10101110 1100 10101011 10101111 110111 01011010111 0100111010 010011100111 1101010 110010 11110101 01 001011101 111111 1011011 011 111011 111101 11111 111 1110110 1111 011 11111 11 1001 1001 1001 1010111101 01110111011 1111100 11 11 01101 11011 001 1111111 111 111111 111010 10111001 1101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,495 |
Words | 324 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 4, 6, 6, 4, 6, 7, 10, 5, 6 |
Lines Amount | 56 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 102 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
About this poem
this poem portraits my yearn for a break of change as I repeat the same patterns, relive the same moments and fall back into the sour routine of my story of life .
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Written on July 27, 2022
Submitted by Lahaz0672 on August 20, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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