Analysis of Droplets within



never thought I’d be able
I never thought you’d save
Give me Hope

It’s the melting candle
Rolling down slowly
Fading into nothingness
Flames slowly going out
Forming into pure darkness

It’s a narrow corridor
Filled with thousands
But all you hear is silence
Lost within

Blinding sun , feeling like
Forever nightfall
Raining , stormy
Grey thick clouds of sadness

You ,
Your spirit glowing
Turning clouds into gates
Opening into heaven

You,
Giving wind to wings
Of the pigeon , with a note
Where lights bright , boldly
with a glimpse.

Not hope
But WILL and strength.
Mighty enough
Pure enough
And just enough
To hold onto the pureness of
Raw Happiness within

Because that very message
Was more than
Needed .

As I was on my knees
Weakened
Begging shamelessly
To those who blinded me
Who had constant doubts.

Now I see…
Thankfully , saving me
From within .
Pure , selfless &
Beautiful wrinkly hands
Uplifting just in time

But knowing …. Painfully

The flutters of your eyes
Will close
The air within will run out.
The rose will finally fall
being the true saving
Of me .


Scheme axb acded xxxf xgcd Hixx Hxxcx bxjjjxf xxx xxccx ccfdxx c xxegic
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110 110111 111 101010 10110 1001100 110101 1001110 1010100 1110 1111110 101 101101 0101 1010 111110 1 11010 101011 1000110 1 10111 1010101 11110 101 11 1101 1001 101 0101 1110011 110001 0111010 111 10 111111 10 10100 111101 11101 111 100101 101 110 10011 10101 110100 010111 11 0101111 0111001 100110 11
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,130
Words 239
Sentences 8
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 4, 4, 4, 5, 7, 3, 5, 6, 1, 6
Lines Amount 53
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

It’s about death and the memories that helped heal from pain and basically saved the life

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Written on August 04, 2022

Submitted by Nairahpetersen99 on August 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nairah Petersen

Young female From South Africa , Cape Town Most of the poems I write is when I feel a burst of emotion more…

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