Analysis of His presence
Three years down the line
My heart still chooses you
How i hate to admit
That you play a melodious song
In my dismal life
When will you discern
The love i have for you
For it sparks so bright
Like your face under the ardent sun
Your presence blithes me
I see you persistently
How i wish you can approach me
For i have no guts
Because the fear of rejection haunts me
Periodically
But i see there's a lass
That you keep gazing upon
There goes my chance
Of owning your heart
Shout out to her
For she triumphed
Till she dismirches
I shall remain destituted
| Scheme | XABXX XAXXC CCDCC XXXXXXDB |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11101 111101 111101 111001001 01101 11101 011111 11111 111100101 11011 1110100 11111011 11111 0101101011 01000 111101 1111001 1111 11011 1110 1110 111 11011 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 564 |
| Words | 120 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 5, 8 |
| Lines Amount | 23 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 111 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
About this poem
This poem is about the failure of the poet in confessing their love to a boy that she likes and now she has to suffer the consequences of seeing him with someone else
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Written on August 20, 2022
Submitted by Releh on August 19, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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