Analysis of Snow flakes
Your weaknesses
Was a Tremendous
power to the nature
You removed dust
from land
You shinned sand
You enchanted the leaves !
You refreshed their moves
See the peak !!
In absolute rest
the mountain of Everest
Covered with your vest
had recognized
Your well organized,
Soundless fall
Without fakes
Snowflakes
you amazed birds
frogs, and snakes
Your melting on lakes
quenched their thirst
See !!
I have this confess:
You are the incomparable brush
Not only for the visible
trash
But also for the moral
smash
Me , if you remember the day
I was trembling as you gifted Me
that cold white blouse
to my surprise !!
No chimney no sunrise
Lonely near the bus station
but Lucky
My blood turned to be a blaze
To my surprise !!
The blaze pierced my deep
freeze
my tongue !
Can not talk
My lips crackling
Like a stork
but, my inner voice
was Like a monk
I was repeating
A survival phrase :
My Lord
I ask you for pardon
for the sins
I committed before
For being guilty
Guilty?
Human mind asked
That'sTrue, my heart replied
I may have committed a fault
I may have scared
An innocent infant
The answer to my earnest
Prayer was big anyway
The sky changed my way
Thank you my Lord
Now, incomparable brush
your job almost done
You played your part :
Flushed the heart
Brushed the earth
from the heavy dirt
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Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 1,298 |
Words | 246 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 68 |
Lines Amount | 68 |
Letters per line (avg) | 15 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,024 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 241 |
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This confess dedicated to the snow I defeated in the second cleanest city in the world Ifrane city in Morocco
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