Analysis of The Boy I Used To Know



The Boy I Used To Know

Are you the boy I used to know
Before you felt you had to go
You were my life for so long
To me you were like a beautiful song
Now you have a family of your own
Flesh of your flesh, bone of your bone
My dream for you is that you will be
The best husband and father anyone will ever see
That you’ll serve the Lord with all of your heart
Until He says, “It’s time to part”

I love you more than you could ever know
And I don’t ever want to put on a show
Teach your children all you’ve learned
And that the gospel is not to be spurned
Time goes by so fast as you’ll see
Before you know it they’ll be gone…..all three
You’ll wonder where the time has gone
And wish that you could write a song
About all the days you had together
And the time that floated by like a feather

So make the best of the time you have
The Word of God is a wonderful salve
When you need wisdom or want to know
It is the only place to go
Don’t waste the gift that you’ve been given
And spend your time just makin’ a livin’
He has much for you to do
He gave you a gift that’s only in you
I wait for the day when it’s manifest
And I know that you will give it your best


Scheme A AABBCCDDEE AAFFDDXBGG XXAAXAHHII
Poetic Form
Metre 011111 11011111 01111111 1011111 1110101001 1110100111 11111111 111111111 0110010101101 1110111111 01111111 1111111101 01110111101 1110111 0101011111 11111111 0111111111 11010111 01111101 0110111010 00111011010 110110111 0111101001 111101111 11010111 110111110 011111001 1111111 1110111001 111011110 0111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,268
Words 258
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 10, 10, 10
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 223
Words per stanza (avg) 63

About this poem

I wrote it for my son.

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Written on November 05, 2008

Submitted by natty86 on August 27, 2022

Modified on April 29, 2023

1:17 min read
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Rita Silvestri

I am a mother of 4 children and I wrote this for my oldest son. I live in a small Canadian town on the board of USA. more…

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