Analysis of दो पल



जिंदगी कि इस भीड से चलो दो पल चुराते है..
तुम बैठो पास मेरे.. ओर हम तुम्हें देख कर मुस्कुराते है...
माना बड़ी जदोजह्द है जिंदगी गुजारने में.. मुशकिल से मिला है जो वक्त चलो ना उसे ही सजाते है..
तो सुनो ना चलो  बैठो मेरे पास ..ओर हम तुम्हें देखकर मुस्कुराते है..
जहा तुम खड़े हों,  वही थोड़ी दूर पर हम भी खड़े है.. तो चलो जो दूरी है आज उसी को कम करते है..
तुम बैठो तो दो पल मेरे पास .. ओर हम तुम्हें देख कर मुस्कुराते है.
सुकुन की तलाश इस दौर में तुम्हें भी है, हमे भी हैं... .जब वक्त है तो चलो मिलकर उस सुकुन को तलाशते है..
तो सुनो ना सुकुन से बैठो मेरे साथ.. ओर हम तुम्हें देख कर मुस्कुराते है.


Scheme
Poetic Form Palindrome
Metre 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Characters 1,462
Words 135
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 0
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 0
Words per stanza (avg) 131

About this poem

During the 2nd wave of Covid, most of people lost their partners, and most of couples (my friend circle) irritrate with partners during the lockdown.. I am convey msg to my friends by this poem.

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Submitted by anitadayal19 on August 27, 2022

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Anita Dayal

I am a post graduate from sociology, and by profession I am Program Executive in CSR. And I love to work for comunity. My hobbies is reading and writing. more…

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