Analysis of My Sweet Berry
Berry Berry sweet Berry.
I wish to have your taste early
your warm hug in the morning cold
makes me rise so strong and bold
At dawn when all men rise
To examine the stars with the eye of the wise
I long for you,
my sweet berry.
I yell to the winds, “Oh, winds, carry me.”
Carry me to the land of the west
to the place of the beauty and best
Whose love so sweet and better to taste
in both slow motion and sweeter in haste
I miss my Berry, my only Berry
On whose laps am so light to carry.
Her skin is soft and so tender to touch
Her chest is soft, even plusher than the couch.
The left and the right teeth divide in a gap
oh, when I see that, I never nap
Her round, appealing hunch is a plus.
Her curving crus terminates in a plush.
Without you I can’t breathe
without you my heart has to bleed
I just in dreams that I can’t believe
I say, without you, life can’t be lived.
come back to me and revive my heart.
I promise to keep you just in my heart.
By Teacher Kevin
Copyright © Teacher Kevin Ouma | Year Posted 2022
Scheme | AABBCCXA ADDEEAA XXFFXX XXXXGGXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1010110 11111110 11100101 1111101 111111 101001101101 1111 1110 1110111101 101101101 101101001 111101011 0111001001 1111011010 111111110 0111011011 0111101101 01001101001 111111101 010101101 010110001 011111 01111111 110111101 110111111 111100111 1101111011 11010 1010101110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,040 |
Words | 234 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 7, 6, 8 |
Lines Amount | 29 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 195 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 53 |
About this poem
A lover longing for his love after recovery from heartbreak
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Written on September 20, 2022
Submitted by TeacherKevrin on September 20, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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