Analysis of A Problem

Bill Chase 1967 (Detroit)



"We have a problem.”
“A problem?”
“Yes.  We all need to come together and fix it.”
“Where is the problem?”
“It’s everywhere.  All encompassing.  It’s been there for years and years.”
“I don’t see it.”
“That’s because you are likely part of the problem.”
“I don’t want to be part of the problem.  I just don’t see the problem.”
“We don’t want you to be part of the problem.  We want you to help us fix the problem.  So we will teach you how to see the problem.”
“I can learn how to see the problem?”
“Not only can you learn…it’s important that you see the problem.”
“How do I begin to see the problem?”
“First you will need to accept that you are part of the problem.”
“And then I can stop being part of the problem?”
“Probably not.  We don’t think that is possible other than at the margin.  But you can alert others to the problem.  And that will please us.”
“Do they see it?”
“Most will be blind to it.  That is why we need people like you to join us and tell people of the problem..”
“What will I say?”
“First, through your words and actions you must remind everyone at all times that you can see the problem and that it is against everything that you stand for.”
“Okay.”
“Then let them know that they are making things worse for us by being part of the problem.”
“And if they still cannot see the problem?”
“Then you should shame them for their ignorance.”
“And if they should push back?”
“They should be shunned.”
“But what if they are right?”
“That is the type of question that perpetuates the problem.  Don’t go there.”
“Are you part of the problem?”
“Of course not.  We are here to fix the problem.”
“So not everyone is part of the problem?”
“Correct.  Our group is fixing the problem, we are not part of the problem.”
“And you all can see the problem?”
“Absolutely.  We have felt the effects of this problem for years and years.”
“I’m sorry.  That must be terrible.”
“Don’t patronize.  It is impossible for you to empathize with us because of your proximity to the problem itself.”
“The one I cannot see?”
“Yes.”


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Poetic Form
Metre 11010 010 111111010011 11010 110101001111101 1111 101111011010 11111110101111010 11111111010111111101011111111010 111111010 1101111010111010 1110111010 111110111111010 011111011010 10011111110010110101110110101001111 1111 11111111111101111101101010 1111 11110101101101111111010011101101111 1 111111110111111011010 0111101010 1111111100 011111 1111 111111 11011101010010111 1111010 11111111010 1110111010 0110111001011111010 01111010 01011100111101101 110111100 110110100111101101110100101001 011101 1
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,194
Words 415
Sentences 54
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 37
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,486
Words per stanza (avg) 393
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Written on April 01, 2021

Submitted by Wchase44 on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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