Analysis of Ameliorate

Hanaya Rama 2007 (Delhi)



The alluring breeze and the crimson skies
coffee being blended with forging smiles.

Amaurotic to the god living inside,
pretending to be copious, dwelled with gold eyes.

Sprinkling the sparkles of greed and envy,
satisfying themselves with false economy

The attorney was bribed, the criminal was communal,
an ardent man was just an anomalous.

Oh lord just give mastery to your disciples, they are unknown about the barbarous wandering in the aisles .

If  only trifling humanity can be seen flourishing through the brown eyes.

Then my comrade i bet the world will become a finer deposit,
 cautiously the lies will fade the shattered will gain a rosette.


Scheme AB XA CC XX B A XX
Poetic Form
Metre 0010100101 1010101101 11011001 010111001111 1001011010 10001110100 00101101001010 11011110100 1111100110101101010100100001 1101001001111001011 1111101101010010 100011101011001
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 660
Words 123
Sentences 6
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

The poem 'Ameliorate' in the first few stanzas describes the cruel generation and aura of today's time and reflects the false virtues. In the ending, the poem talks about the conditions and transformation toward a better world.

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Written on September 01, 2022

Submitted by hanaya2507 on September 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Being a teenager and witnessing all kinds of ups and downs , i have started my journey of focusing on myself. Writing poems , blogs always motivate me to keep going and romanticize my life. I love to socialize and i try my best to spread happiness all around. more…

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