Analysis of Creative License

Ana Lawton 1957 (Havana)



I thought I was an empty page, and waited for a poet's thoughts to fill me.
I thought I was a canvas, clean, and craved a painter's brush to shape me.
I thought I was acoustic silence, and yearned for one perfect chord to free me.
The poet's words lacked substance.
The painter's stroke was flat.
The music never touched me.
Though graceless, and devoid of style, my page has now been written.
My canvas, messy swirls of watercolor, obscure, lacking hints of promise.
A concert of cacophony surrounds me, resounds in me, with incessant loudness.
In my search for perfect artistry, I have lived a life mundane.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1111110101010101111 11110101010101111 1111010100111011111 0101110 010111 0101011 110001111111110 110101110001101110 0101010001110110101 0111011001110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 613
Words 117
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 476
Words per stanza (avg) 108

About this poem

We wish our life away with complicated plans and lofty expectations, but life weaves its own tapestry. We are, in the end, but what life makes of us.

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Submitted by anaguiu57 on September 27, 2022

Modified on April 10, 2023

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