Analysis of Death Note



If I am dead someday,
remember for me not to pray!
When my skin and lips become dry;
don’t bid me bye ,
with that cry.....

Never think I am caught by curses
but remember I am showered with blessing...
for thou time is over,
And thy God needs my seeking.

Depart me with love and smiles,
for I have to travel miles;
In my funeral no tear should shred,
and remember me no more; coz I am dead.

for , If someday I am gone,
remember my part for this birth is done.


Scheme AABBB XCXC DDEE XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111 01011111 11101011 1111 111 101111110 10101110110 111110 0111110 0111101 1111101 011001111 00101111111 111111 0101111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 463
Words 108
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Why we think death as an de-missal? Lets re imagine death in a new way!!

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Written on July 29, 2022

Submitted by monojitpaul410 on September 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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