Analysis of Fictional Umbrella
Do you really have to be that honest?
Did I even mean anything to you? Please say yes...
I'll see you holding an umbrella for someone else
While I say "adorable" with a smiling face
I smile, while it rains, I am in pain
But there really wasn't something for me to gain
The word "best friend" didn't really suit us
Maybe we were meant to end.
And maybe I always was your second option,
Well, I at least hoped someday I was your first
And now you are somebody else, with dreams
And I'm stuck forever, with a foolish grin
I wouldn't even try to blame you
If I was you, I would hate me too
I hesitate to talk, what if I might not be of your worth?
What if you too find me stupid, maybe you already do
And I would be as faint as a fairy's wings
I would suddenly disappear without no evidence
So if you are seeing this, I promise
I was always supposed to be the loneliest me
Scheme | X X X X A A B X X X X X C C X C X X B X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110111110 111011011111 111101010111 111010010101 111111101 111010101111 0111101011 1010111 01011111010 1111111111 011110111 01101010101 110101111 111111111 11011111111111 111111101010101 0111111011 1110001011100 1111101110 1110111011 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 887 |
Words | 199 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 20 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 33 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 9 |
About this poem
This poem says, how a childhood friend who was replaced by her bestfriend, despite of trying to be with them forever, she was hated, she saw their "bestfriend" hold hands with other people, smile with them, laugh with them, leaving her to walk alone...
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Written on September 23, 2022
Submitted by adreejabiswas10 on September 22, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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