Analysis of Momma's gone it's no joke



Imagine this wrap your head around this folks
I really thought this was some kind of hoax
They said she's no longer here
Little do they know I was no longer there
Imagine being in a room with your dead mom
Told you have to be quite an calm
 Your mind is floating body still there
Thoughts are whirling all in the air
Only Gods strength can get you through this
You pray an hope he answers your wish
You touch her she's still warm
Doing it softly as to cause no harm
Thank you Lord I know she is watching
This is why I settle for nothing
She always said I have big balls
I know she watches as I stand tall.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01011110111 1101111111 1111101 10111111101 010100011111 11111111 111101011 11101001 101111111 111111011 110111 1011011111 111111110 111110110 1111111 111101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 691
Words 143
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 479
Words per stanza (avg) 123

About this poem

This poem is all about the day my 57 year old mom fell. She had numerous injuries an did not survive.

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Written on September 28, 2022

Submitted by anniemo269 on September 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Antoinette M Moses

I am a retired blk female. The only thing I want to be famous for is my poetry. Stay blessed an safe all. more…

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