Analysis of The Second Cup

Michael Westcombe 1953 (Durban)



How sweet this brew, unsugared, blended tea,
Infused with my love for you, and yours for me!
So blessed, from rich estates, and Darjeeling,
Expressing so much of us, our mutual feeling.

And as the pungent liquor slowly pours,
I reflect on this love of mine, and of yours.
Our children, like the issue from the spout
Are sometimes here, but much more often, out.

So much survived, and much more shared
Leaves both of us with nerve ends bared;
And this, the gentle ritual, brewing tea
Provides for me, an essential sheltering lea:

Because your welcome presence lifts me up,
I always pour for you, the second cup!

© Michael Westcombe 2012


Scheme AABB XXCC DDAA EE X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 01111110111 111101010 01011111010010 0101010101 10111111011 10101010101 1011111101 11010111 11111111 01010100101 011110101001 0111010111 111110101 101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 640
Words 128
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

My wife and I both have a passion for good tea. I wrote this for her.

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Written on 2012

Submitted by on September 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Michael Westcombe

Born Durban 1953. School and some university there. Moved to England June 1974. Two male children. more…

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