Analysis of There Is No Song
THERE IS NO SONG
I can never write a song about the hands
They are with me always but are not in verse
In my life since I was too young
It's never a song, it's something worse
A chorus would be another instance
Of the times hands wrapped around me
A refrain against my will that reminds me
No song should be sung to haunt me
Fingers like these don't fit into music
Nothing lyrical in doing such wrong
Something ironic in now wanting hands to hold
Presenting the perpetually unsolved mystery
Of how hands have hurt, but my heart must heal
There is injustice in never speaking the words
Or telling the story of the hands and what they took from me
I have covered the hurts with so many things
And feared that my hands too would stray
No, there are no songs about those hands
There are only these stanzas to bring to light
How a young boy felt when he touched me first
How the guilt over so many years has remained secret
It's hard to count the things ruined or infected by those years
Tears shed wanting it never to happen
Time spent wondering if the scars show
Don't take away the daily reminder that it did
Hands of injustice move my clothes and make me
They touch inside even while outside and they stain me
Hands persist and are unknown to many
And in my song, I sing alone
There could be no interlude for voice
No chorus or verse to make the hands not ruin
But for another, the music may stir a response
A trust and fellowship in a shared misfortune
How many years must a man consider these hands
When will he grow beyond the first touch of injustice
When can he forget clothes pulled away
Or must he be reminded and never let it go
What more can that abuse infect
How many bottles were spent trying to protect
And years later to be sober and reflect
That no song about hands would ever be complete
For life's circumstance must not always fit to verse
There cannot be dance for tears and worse
Hands made me bare before I knew
And I have wished for sharing, perhaps with you
Could you understand the hands that tore into my innocence
Can I trust you not to cast doubt on each occurrence
Could you ever know the hurt that still resides
And makes me search for a song
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 11101010101 1111111101 01111111 110011101 0101101010 10111011 00101111011 11111111 1011110110 1010001011 100100110111 01000100001100 1111111111 110100101001 110010101011111 11100111101 01111111 111110111 11101101111 1011111111 10110110110110 111101101010111 1110110110 111001011 1101010010111 11010111011 1101101110111 1010101110 00111101 11111011 110111101110 1101001011001 01010001010 110110101011 1111010111010 111011101 1111010010111 11110101 110100110101 01101110001 111011110101 1110111111 110111101 11110111 01111100111 11010111011100 1111111111010 11101011101 0111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 2,180 |
Words | 429 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 13 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 50 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 134 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 32 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem at a moment of discovery remembering the hurt of childhood abuse. In these lines I yearn for music to comfort me, and yet find no lyric that satisfies the soul.
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Written on March 02, 2017
Submitted by adam.volant on September 02, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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