Analysis of The bloom on the Island

M. R. Malik 1994 (Kashmir)



The bloom on the Island "
Madam madam, shining diamond,
Like the bloom on lonely island;
Coming office in the morning,
Festoon it and veil the mourning.

Madam madam, we miss you all,
In thy shadow even some may call.
Who will take care us in bright sky ?
See the broken hearts where you lie.

Remind our days into owl hall
Where thy voice is loved so by all;
Writing papers with thy curled smile,
Sometimes, scold us with thy life style .

Madam madam, shining diamond,
Like the bloom on lonely island;
Murmur murmur, in the class room,
Relish, flying us to spring moon.

Wailing, why we couldn't find you there?
Only mysteries cuddle in blank chair!
'Bushra maam', will you come morrow ?
We will be glad with no sarrow!
     


Scheme aAAbb ccdd ccee AAxx ffxf
Poetic Form
Metre 011010 10101010 10111010 10100010 1101010 10101111 01110111 11111011 10101111 011010111 11111111 10101111 01111111 10101010 10111010 10100011 10101111 101110111 1010010011 1111110 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 731
Words 153
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem is addressed to Bushra ma'am who was transferred from the linguistics department of Kashmir University to somewhere else. The poem reveals her love for students. The students want her to come back ...

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Submitted on October 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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M. R. Malik

Mohmad Rafi Malik(M.R.Malik) is a Kashmiri -english poet, writer and researcher, lives in a hamlet, Achabal, Rafiabad Kashmir. His father's name is Manzoor Ahmad Malik and mother's name is Haleema Bagum.He completed his masters in English literature as well as in Comparative Religion.His Published book is Bleeding Soul: A collection of poems, stories and quotations. You can get it fromhttps://www.amazon.co.uk/Bleeding-Soul-collection-stories-quotations-ebook/dp/B09QBX82YB. His famous poems: To his honey son, Midnight's snowfall, After wintry winter, 'O journey, The Glossy Morning Breeze, etc. more…

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