Analysis of Feelings



These things make me cheerful
sunshine on the sea
birthday parties, parents
and my favorite food  for tea.

These things make me sad
a grey and gloomy day
unkind word and unkind less
when friends just walk away.

These thing make me angry
pests who pull my hair
people who break promise
and times when lives not fair.

These think make me clam
a smile from a friends
sleepy bedtime stories
with a very happy end


Scheme XAXA XBXB ACXC XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 111110 1101 11010 01100111 11111 010101 0110011 111101 111110 11111 101110 011111 11111 01101 10110 1010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 414
Words 85
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by nakiyanakiya1041 on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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