Analysis of Goodbye



As this goodbye
That I say to you
Brings me to tears
Wishing it wasn't true...

As this time
That seems to stand still
Pulls me apart
Ready to kill

As this breath
That I take
But don't feel
Brings heartache

As this soul
That i let go
Go it does
Leaving a hole

As this love
That i always hold
That i always held
Leaves me cold

As this heart
That was attuned
To the tunes
Of the moon

As these eyes
That once feasted on
The sight of your body
Have become worn

As these ears
That carried your whispers
Have starved themselves
In deep despair

As this body
That laid beside you
Feeling in sync
Now split in two..

As this reality
That refuses to hide..
My dear it is time
I said goodbye...

As this goodbye
That is my last
I will always remember
What you and I had


Scheme Abxb cded xfxf gxxg xhxh exxx xxix xxxx ibxb ixca Axxx
Poetic Form Quatrain  (45%)
Metre 111 11111 1111 101101 111 11111 1101 1011 111 111 111 11 111 1111 111 1001 111 1111 1111 111 111 1101 101 101 111 11101 011110 1011 111 110110 1101 0101 1110 11011 1001 1101 1110 101011 11111 111 111 1111 111010 11011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 784
Words 183
Sentences 5
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

A goodbye to no one

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Written on October 08, 2022

Submitted by denizkrisss on October 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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