Analysis of How's life

Abhinav Das 2007 (Assam)



I’m abashed,
I’m abandoned.
You always ask that how’s my life,
I can’t answer and my feelings get abide.
Finding the acceptable satisfaction in life is Abstruse,
Life won’t give the accolade to me.
Life just says me to excuse,
That’s not right for me.
I can be the petrol in a spark,
But it feels me to be in dark.
It feels like I’m the accomplice,
Life just keeps giving me lies.
But dear, life gave you memories,
And you always remember the worst memories.
Think about it,
Life is just reminding you that you failed on it.
And you can do much better,
Just some aggression is required my dear!
Don’t lose your mind,
Do more hard word that even the mind can’t imagine.
Win will be enjoyed by you and the mind!
Just do the hard word that even the mind can’t imagine!


Scheme ABCDEFEFGGHIJJKKLMNONO
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1010 1111111 11100110101 100010001001101 11101011 1111101 11111 111010001 11111101 11110010 1111011 11111100 01101001100 1011 111010111111 0111110 11010101011 1111 1111110011010 1110111001 11011110011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 785
Words 167
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 587
Words per stanza (avg) 146

About this poem

This is a poem for our life. And I wrote this poem for them, who don't feel good for their existence or living more. People who are in depression can get motivated through it. A last thing, always think about you life. Don't just say you've gave up. Be positive.

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Written on October 16, 2022

Submitted by 10757masked.abhi10757 on October 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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