Analysis of INTRUDER ALERT
I was caught
mid-thought
about to write
some nonsense was falling out of my head.
Caught by a noise
unsure what it was
I sat still
listened intent.
Amid the silence
that noise was clear
an intruder was lurking somewhere within,
I dare not move
just looked around
trying to decide
what I should do.
Then a magazine slid sideways
from where it was rested
by the side of my chair
causing my eyes to look everywhere,
there it was this daring intruder
scampering across the carpet
a mouse with whiskers
distinct like a wilted toothbrush
running for cover
behind the sofa.
I leapt from my chair
notepad in hand
thinking I will catch you
but off they ran.
No point in pursuit
down under floorboards
this intruder wins
amid their moment
of victorious asunder.
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRRSTUVSWRXOYZ1 2 3 S |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 11 0111 1101101111 1101 01111 111 1001 01010 1111 1010110101 1111 1101 1011 1111 101011 111110 101111 10111110 111110010 10001010 01110 01101010 10110 01010 11111 101 101111 1111 11001 1101 10101 01110 10100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 751 |
Words | 142 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 34 |
Lines Amount | 34 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 608 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 135 |
About this poem
Our senses sometimes alert us to noise, an intruder.
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Written on October 12, 2022
Submitted by Nolostalgia on October 12, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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