Analysis of My precious

M.meiyar mani 2000 (Mayabunder)



Heart in me is cause of you,
Love to leave in presence of you,

Joyness in me
Is made by beauty in you.

Relationship between me and you,
Is like the force of holding moon towards earth.

I will be moving around you,
As that of moon around earth.

Let the rate of breathing in me and you combines as like as our souls.

Choose me as your partner in life ,
Which can fill with happiness and joy.

My pleasure lives in you,
Let us proove the world that our soul is pure and true..


Scheme AA XA AB AB X XX AA
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111 11101011 101 1111001 01001101 11011101011 11110011 1111011 101110010101111101 11111001 111110001 110101 1110111011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 479
Words 113
Sentences 6
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

This a poem written on the basis of love relation between boy and a girl.. How a boy expresses is love towards a girl.

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Written on October 23, 2022

Submitted by Meiyar on October 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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