Analysis of Raining Red



I grew up believing that the rain is red.

Red like the scars mapped across my body,
gifted by a man who colour red embodied
Hot stew for all meals resembled the red sandstone, which brother went to mine from blood-marked zones Every day we took a bath in red water,
sourced from a brick well
Everywhere we were blocked by red tape,
sourced from bureaucratic cells
You see, red is omnipresent
It’s the colour of resistance but also the colour of our blood
Does this mean we’re born to resist?
I resisted red
but how can you, if all you see are corpses - dead.
A memory surfaces in my head,
how my sister was shamed monthly for her red
I can smell it too, you know
The red, a scent of my morning breath
Remnants of the wars fought by words I can only dare to speak in stealth If red is the paint I’ve been coloured in, body and bone
It’s only logical to see my surroundings in the same tone
So when it rained the other day
I said,
“Ma, see it’s raining red today!”


Scheme A XXXXXXXXXAAAAXXBBCAC
Poetic Form
Metre 11101010111 1101101110 10101111010 111110100111101111111100111010110 11011 10101111 110101 1111010 1011010110011101 11101101 10101 111111111101 0100100011 11101110101 1111111 010111101 1010111111101110111101111001001 1101001110100011 11110101 11 11110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 978
Words 200
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 20
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 375
Words per stanza (avg) 95

About this poem

I wrote this poem to describe the ageing quality that trauma possesses and how it strips, even a young child of their innocence and ability to view the world beautifully.

Font size:
 

Written on July 07, 2021

Submitted by mridvik on October 29, 2022

Modified on April 25, 2023

1:00 min read
45

Mridvi Khetan

I am a college-going student currently completing a major in psychology and creative writing. Writing poetry and prose from different unnatural perspectives is my guilty pleasure (so is singing fusion Acappella in my uni!) I also run a personal blog on Instagram for all my poetic musings as well as music covers :) more…

All Mridvi Khetan poems | Mridvi Khetan Books

1 fan

Discuss this Mridvi Khetan poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Raining Red" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 4 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/143455/raining-red>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Mridvi Khetan

    »

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    26
    days
    9
    hours
    19
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    William Blake: "Tiger Tiger, burning bright, In the forests of the _________".
    A night
    B fight
    C bites
    D knight