Analysis of Two hearts

Ayomide Damilare 2004 (kwara state)



Belonging to each other with a string 

Fear of letting go saturate both heart

When the whirlwind of betray blew

And the boat of love shook

Two hands intertwined to Tarry

The fragile hand slipping off 

The callant vehemently halting his damsel 

Heart of confiding in each other seems lost

"Let's disperse," said an innocent voice. 

Reminiscing on the old affectionate moment

Earlier, two on a boat and one left

The blue sea of destruction, smiling.

With an open arms ready to embrace the betrayal

 An eternal damnation avenging on behalf of the pious.


Scheme A X X X X X B X X X X A B X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101110101 111011011 1011011 001111 11001110 0101101 01100010110 11010011011 101111001 010101010010 1001101011 011101010 11101101010010 10100100101011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 608
Words 117
Sentences 3
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

Two hearts, is a poem of two lovers who had been together from the very set that both sahred a passionate affection. they both trust each other even for a seconds they can't hide things from each other. when it for to a point the love between them began to shrink, one betrayed the other by also breaking up with the other.

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Written on February 10, 2022

Submitted by ayomideoluwadamilare300 on October 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ayomide Damilare

I was born and brought up in a rural area, when it was finally time to complete my secondary education i move to the city. I spent every of my times and activities while staying indoors. today am a girl who's still pursuing her dream with every breath of hers, I love writing poetry a lot because its makes me express my feelings and i write stories as well. more…

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