Analysis of Why do we Care?



After they go, I'm all alone
Nobody was there to pick up my phone.
I wonder why I tried in the first place,
Life is too short of making it a race.

Say what you want, do as you please,
It can be as stupid as climbing trees.
Live your life to the best,
Have no problems, don't make it a test.

If they don't accept you, let them be,
Let them ask "who is she?"
In the end, it does not matter.
So what's the point of making our hearts fatter?
 


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 10111101 11111111 1101110011 1111110101 11111111 1111101101 111101 111011101 111011111 111111 00111110 110111010110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 453
Words 107
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

I wrote this poem when I was going through a rough time in my life, this poem helped me realize what I need to do with my life.

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Submitted by 26aasjai on October 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Aashna Jain

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