Analysis of I can't breathe



Can you really change? Because I'm tired of this cycle.

Did I commit a crime which leads you to envy me in such a way I can't breathe?

I will call you depression because you are killing me inside. They said blood is thicker than water but I say water flows faster than blood.

You throw me in the field where one must fight. Lucky are those who have brothers who treat them like brothers.
Positivity is my only weapon


Scheme X X X XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101011101110 11010111111010101111 11110100111101011111101101111011011 111001111110111110111110 1111010
Characters 419
Words 87
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 66
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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This poem is about my brother's envy towards me

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Submitted by brandonnwila on November 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nashiru Nwila Brandon

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