Analysis of THE TIME MASTER
The Time Master is slinking
Through the corridors of time,
Deciding whose life continues
And whose life shall decline.
Putting sand into an hourglass
While another's sand he removes,
One shall gain a good forty years
Another person will surely lose.
The good die young, or so they say
The Time master doesn't even care,
He gives or takes at his own whim
And sees no reason to ever be fair.
The sand is most commonly yellow
Yet it's sometimes, brown, or red,
Yellow means an uneventful lifetime
A good life when all is done and said:
Brown sand means a life of suffering
When all hope of success has fled,
Red sand is the sand of eternal pain
When truly you'd be better off dead.
White is the colour of success
When everything always goes right,
The sand of billionaires and moguls,
The sand of hope, of a very long life.
The Time Master is slinking
Through yellow jaundiced halls,
Emptying or filling hourglasses
That line the yellowing walls.
Time is running out for many
For others, it goes on forever,
As the good die oh so young
The many evil will suffer never.
THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | Abcx xxxc xdxd xebe aexe xxxx Afxf xgag xxx |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 011011 1010011 1011010 011101 10101110 10101101 11101101 010101101 01111111 011010101 11111111 0111011011 011110010 1101111 10110101 011111101 111011100 11110111 1110110101 110111011 1101101 110111 01101010 0111101011 011011 110101 100110100 1101001 11101110 110111010 1011111 0101011010 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,147 |
Words | 230 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 100 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
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The Time Master is slinking Through the corridors of time, Deciding whose life continues And whose life shall decline.
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Written on November 28, 2022
Submitted by philip0157 on November 28, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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