Analysis of peace



im walking
with the moon glowing dim
im naked

with vines growing on my skin
the wind blows on my face
bringing a cool, soft, relaxing breeze
everything around me is beautiful
from as far as i can see
my fingers brush through the flowers
with the lavender scent running up my nose
as my bare feet steps on the grass
with dirt on the bottom of my toes
the water of the creek runs over my legs
and rises up between my thighs
bugs are crawling on my neck
with tears of comfort in my eyes

the sun rises
i lift my hands
and call out to the sky

i am free...
i am at peace...


Scheme XXX XXXXAXBXBXCXC XXX AX
Poetic Form
Metre 110 101101 110 1110111 011111 100110101 100111100 1111111 11011010 10100110111 11111101 111010111 01010111011 01010111 1110111 11110011 0110 1111 011101 111 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 570
Words 121
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 13, 3, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

this poem is about the surreal beauty of nature and what it feels like to feel peace. written November 3rd, 2022

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Written on November 03, 2022

Submitted by on December 06, 2022

Modified by on December 06, 2022

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