Analysis of Champagne and Maritime Pines



While keeping oneself to one's self,
feelings kept close to the chest,
I close my eyes and take a deep breath
and imagine open fields, windswept.

A breeze blows in from the Mediterranean,
salt-tinged, from a place I've never been.
Carrying scents yet unfamiliar to me
upon wind gusts from a nearby beach.

I'm standing beneath a pink-tawny sky
dyed the colors of Champagne, France.
Looking over panoramic landscapes—
paddock checkered and fence-lined.

The Mistral wind strolls over rolling hillocks
and crosses clover-covered knolls,
causing shamrock leaves to briefly turn over,
a green to silver shimmering in its wake.

This leaves me imagining sea waves
invading a serene mirrored lake
'til inevitably meeting its windbreak
on a distant tree line of tall Maritime Pines.

I notice the ground I'm standing on
is completely covered in four-leaf clovers
so I decide to sit down, cross-legged
and look for three-leaf clovers instead.

What was once keeping me to myself
is now a field of growth within.
Feelings no longer kept close to my chest
but expressed and shared with the wind.


Scheme ABXX XCXX DEXF EEXG XGDX XEXX ACBF
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 1011101 111101011 00101011 01101000100 111011101 1001101011 011110111 1100101101 10101011 10100101 1010011 0101110101 01010101 1011110110 01110100011 111010011 010001101 1010001011 10101111101 110011101 1010100111 111111110 01111101 11110111 11011101 1011011111 10101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,114
Words 212
Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on October 22, 2022

Submitted by Locutus2999 on November 13, 2022

Modified on April 11, 2023

1:04 min read
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Brian S. Clifton

When I am not writing software code, I relax by writing poetry to order my thoughts and work through feelings, which traditionally has sent me down the rabbit hole. more…

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