Analysis of Deep Breaths
I can feel the tentacles slithering around my mind. The darkness seeping in and the tears pouring over the edge of my eyelids, no matter how I try to stop them.
My head hurts from trying to keep everything in.
I’m on the edge
I have given and given and do not have not much left to give.
Deep breaths. Deep breaths.
I tried to reclaim my life. I tried to push through.
There were moments when I did. Moments that outsiders see and think it adds up to a successful and happy life
But I have only ended up right back where I started.
How did this happen?
Because I got to the edge and I didn’t trust myself
I listened to the bullshit
I didn’t just jump
And now I am lost again
Although I see glimmers of light
Glimmers and then the black clouds, the ominous smoke rolls in
It clouds my view
I can’t breathe
I close my eyes
I just want the pain to be over
I want to be content
The tears stream
I don’t want anyone to see them because no one understands
And so many who say they care are the reasons that my eyes burn and my head pounds and my heart aches
They care because they don’t want me to change
Then they won’t get what they need
I will no longer be supply
And that terrifies them
They would rather manipulate and guilt and hurt me
Under the guise of being “the best thing that ever happened to me.“
Stand up. Figure it out.
Once again, fight through it. Get out.
And don’t ever enter this place again.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101001000111010100001101001111110111111 11111011100 1101 1110010011111111 1111 111011111111 1010111101010101111100100101 11110101111110 11110 011110101111 110101 1111 0111101 1111011 10010110100110 1111 111 1111 111011110 111110 011 11110111011101 011011111010111101110111 1101111111 1111111 11110101 01101 111001001011 10011100111101011 111011 10111111 0110101101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,532 |
Words | 338 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 32 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 34 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 9 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem as I navigate depression and some tough life choices, even as my life on the outside looks successful and happy.
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Written on November 14, 2022
Submitted by Christine_1 on November 14, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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