Analysis of Fogs Remorse



A misty fog of regret
Wet vibrations of wants, and needs
Shattered specks of a Soul
A deepened dismantled heart
Love so gross
So shaky

Feelings of deep intensity
Running along every joint
Every cell sheds of heated dew
Nights of fire and earthy glass
Shattered pieces of desperation

Deeper than engraved souls
Longer than the existence of a soul
Flying lower than bees with two wings
Fog so intense, so steamy
Hearts, dragging, twitching, breathing


Scheme XXAXXB BXXXX XAXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 0101101 10101101 101101 0100101 111 110 10110100 10011001 100111101 11100101 10101010 101011 1010010101 101011111 1101110 1101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 455
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Fogs Remorse is about a love that dwindles in nature. A love that’s fighting through every season and glimpse of light.

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Written on July 30, 2022

Submitted by qpford on November 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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