Analysis of Spiritual Coalescence



As the sun goes down, and the eve creeps up,
You and I meet under the stars.
As we break free of the bonds that hold our souls by society's closed minds, we engage in  spiritual act.
I take you wihin my soul, and we become as one.
I enter within your passion,
And you swallow me whole.
We join together in unholy matrimony on the spirit plane and are reborn as one,
And that is love.
The union of passion and love is strong within us.
Together we satisfy one another and create a rediance so bright and powerful,
That we feel ecstasy when near.
You are my soul,
My life,
My everything.
You are me, and I am you...
Our hearts and souls forevermore.


Scheme ABCDDEDFGHIEJKLI
Poetic Form
Metre 1011100111 10111001 1111101111011010011101010001 111111010111 11001110 011011 11010001010010101011111 0111 0101100111011 010110101000101110100 11110011 1111 11 110 1110111 101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 648
Words 141
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 498
Words per stanza (avg) 127

About this poem

This Poem was written back when I was in high school. The poem was inspired by girlfriend at the time, I was madly in love with her. The poem came to me in a dream, and she made me feel as if we were truly soulmates.

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Written on 1995

Submitted by Judelaw007 on November 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Raymond Monzon

I'm Raymond, Born in NYC. I once was a hopeless romantic, now not so much. I love music, reading and going to the movies. I'm a bit of a comedian and love making my friends laugh. I'm a bit of a geek and am computer tech and also love reading comics. more…

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