Analysis of THIRST



It would be his last day,
and talking
had yielded already
to nods and gestures.

Simple requests
confused him,
even single words
were opaque.

The failure
of understanding
was dissolving
the room where he lay.

As dusk softened its edges,
whispered kindness
gave comfort,
revealed thirst to be

his ruling condition.
He drank deep
from the cup held for him,
felt brief and intense zest

return. The wave ebbed
and with it the thanks
that gave meaning beyond
his own body.


Scheme ABCX XDXX XBBA XXXC XXDX XXXC
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 010 110010 11010 1001 011 10101 001 010 1010 1010 01111 1110110 1010 110 01111 110010 111 101111 110011 010110 01101 111001 1110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 486
Words 103
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

I have been deeply affected by the deaths of dear friends during the years of the pandemic.

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Written on April 11, 2022

Submitted by david.cook34 on November 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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David Graham-Cook

Retired psychiatrist. Have published three books, one of which is Translations of Rilke’s Sonnets to Orpheus. more…

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