Analysis of Thirteen



Bend
!
Bend harder
.
No thinking
!
Do what we say
.

Don’t reason
.
Especially don’t feel
.
Shut it off!

Push it down
.
Way down
.
Further
!
Now be happy about it
.

We know better
.
You don’t.

Jump higher!!
Don’t question.

Ask how high
.

Higher still
!
Not good enough!


Let it go
.
Even the memories.

We take 
blood…

Now be happy about it
.
Lifeless, lonely, desperate,

It’s good
.


Scheme abxx cxxddbE ba bc x xx xx x Eex
Poetic Form
Metre 1 110 110 1111 110 01011 111 111 11 10 1110011 1110 11 110 110 111 101 1101 111 100100 111 1110011 101010 11
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 453
Words 97
Sentences 23
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

I was once part of a cult-ish religion and was judged by a council. This poem is how that event felt to me.

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Written on October 15, 2020

Submitted by Oceanloveisland on November 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Amanda East

I grew up in Utah. I have four kiddos. I am now in a healthy happy relationship. I am spiritual, but not religious. I love thinking deeply about the purpose of life. more…

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