Analysis of Sarajevo

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



She hangs her laundry

From wrought iron balcony.

Bullet strafings mark

The white-washed brick.

Neighbour down the hall.

Almost curtains yesterday.

As he hiked empty streets.

To the bakery.

Open Wednesdays and Fridays.

If rifle fire not too bad.

Along the baker’s route.

Town become just a bunch

Of trembling hide-outs.

Central open market closed.

After mass shootings one Saturday.

Twenty one lost.

Just standing in line.

Counting their coins.

Empty concert hall

Swings and sandboxes.

Public garden plots

Full of garbage.

Their beloved City.

Under daily fire.

From those rebellious Hills.

Can’t even imagine

The extent of it.

Her line of laundry

Shows the only bright colours.

Bless the Woman.

Two kids inside.


Scheme A A X X B X C A X X X X X X A X X X B C X X A X X D X A C D X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 1110100 1011 0111 1101 11010 111101 10100 101010 11010111 010101 101101 110011 1010101 101101100 1011 11001 1011 10101 101 10101 1110 10110 101010 110101 110010 00111 01110 101011 1010 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 821
Words 184
Sentences 28
Stanzas 31
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 18
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on December 12, 2022

Submitted by dougb.72572 on December 12, 2022

Modified by dougb.72572 on December 12, 2022

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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