Analysis of The Caregiver’s Pickle



I cannot break through.
Not yet.
Delusions and the voices
She will get.
Fears, insinuation
Crimes of mind.
No defense as sense
Left behind.
How to love
When charges
Come like rain.
How to heal
Affront and pain?
God we wed so
Many years ago.
Kids and caring.
Love her so.


Scheme ABCBDEFEGCHIHJJKJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 11 0100010 111 10010 111 10111 101 111 110 111 111 0101 1111 10101 1010 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 272
Words 61
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 209
Words per stanza (avg) 51

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Written on December 19, 2022

Submitted by dougb.72572 on December 19, 2022

Modified on April 21, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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