Analysis of The Chair

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



She was in the Chair
These past four years.
Movement and speech
Become mechanical.
Nifty stylus operated
By mouth and
Showing needs, hurts, triumphs.
Triumphs?
Yes definitely when
Reverse became manageable
On the joystick.
When spring melt might
Bring on sunny sidewalk
Journeying.
And Gary was there
As if nothing had changed.
Two kids showed stress
But not Gary.
Still caressing, and
Playing silly tricks.
Perhaps their laughter
Was best triumph.
And prayers seemingly
Never answered.
But they were answered.
Yes, no or later.
Covenant at that wedding
Seventeen years back.
Still operative.
Compelling.
Worthy.
Until death?
Well, they almost always
Shoved that monkey aside.
And carried on.


Scheme ABCDEFGGHDIJKLAMNOFPQROSSQLTULOVWXY
Poetic Form Tetractys  (51%)
Metre 11001 1111 1001 010100 1010100 110 101110 10 110001 01011000 101 1111 11101 100 01011 111011 1111 1110 10100 10101 01110 1110 01100 1010 11010 11110 1001110 10111 11000 010 10 011 1111 111001 0101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 696
Words 129
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 560
Words per stanza (avg) 108
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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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