Analysis of The Fiftieth (partnership grows)

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



Ask of me OK?

Fathers love to give.

To lighten the load.

And you remember

You are thankful

In all honesty.

Not like many I see

Who live right down

Slander and lies.

Waiting to do harm.

And this they do

In the face of Almighty.

The Creator and Sustainer.

They have no shame.

They will inherit my wrath.

Terrible as it will be.

But you Child are growing

In the Love Response.

Keep calling, that

I might answer.

In this you approach

My Heart and Agenda.

Your prayers give me pleasure.

Even if sometimes you

Just sit and soak and smile.

My whispers are beginning

To point to large measures

In redemptive purpose

For other reverent, searching ones.

You partner in this.

Beyond your wildest dreams.

Listen and move forward.

(Now read Psalm 50 in the KJV and Philippians 4)


Scheme X X X A X B B X C X D B A X X B E X X A X X A D X E X X X X X X C
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 10111 11001 01010 1110 01100 111011 1111 1001 10111 0111 0011010 001001 1111 1101011 1001111 111110 00101 1101 1110 01101 110010 111110 101011 110101 1101010 111110 001010 110100101 11001 011101 100110 11100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 896
Words 219
Sentences 27
Stanzas 33
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 18
Words per stanza (avg) 4

About this poem

Considers psalm fifty and psalm two.

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Written on January 07, 2023

Submitted by dougb.72572 on January 07, 2023

Modified by dougb.72572 on January 08, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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