Analysis of A Desire



Come, be my love
       and we shall have some summers again
  The beauty of sunshine
       and the showers of rain

In the valleys
        strange and unknown
    Between the butterflies
        and silkworm's cocoon

Under the canopy
          blue and endless
     Across the oceans
          deep and tasteless

The dance of peafowl
         and the melodies of koel
  Lavish green meadows
         and the fragrance of soil

The hops of grasshoper
         and the croaks of frog
   and the sober eyes of your
          under that dense fog

Those sweet whines
        in bright crystal glasses
     I miss those days
        and regret those passes

Come O'beloved
        and dance with me in the rain
  Quench the thirst of my soul
        and relieve my pain

© Muhammad Aamir khan


Scheme XXXA XXXX XBXB CCXX DEDE XFXF XAXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 011111001 01011 001011 0010 1001 01010 0101 100100 1010 01010 1010 0111 0010011 1011 001011 0111 00111 0010111 10111 111 011010 1111 001110 1101 0111001 101111 00111 01011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 817
Words 137
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This poem is my favourite one embedded in romantic couplets.

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Written on July 17, 2021

Submitted by hamkconsultancy on December 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Er.Aamir khan

Er.Aamir khan is a civil engineer by profession and writer by passion.He has an immense love for poetry.You can reach him at his instagram id:amirakhan9 more…

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