Analysis of Amsterdam fall
Ambika dadhich ( pen name - Elania) 2005 (Indore)
We parted up in Amsterdam fall,
bicycles and foggy rooftop,
sneaking sun through the curtains of tangerine clouds.
Lone boats, pink shades,
you with all the colors i can only dream about,
my side was black and white
with the fringe of pink coral,
mixed up with your rainbow shades left me colorless behind.
You snubbed me in the filthiest state,
last night everything was great,
How easily you forget our bowling date nights.
Late December, freezing eve,
Under Christmas tree when we kissed,
skate nights, New year feast,
near hearths, when your arms around me.
Bring me back my magical time,
Snubbed me,the reason ain't me,
with green eyes contrasting own speech.
We parted up in Amsterdam fall,
foliage and shredded heart,
It's June but my hands are still cold.
Scheme | AbcdefghiijklmnonpAqr |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11010101 1000101 10110101011 1111 1110101110101 111101 1011110 1111111110001 1110011 111011 1100101101011 1010101 10101111 11111 11111011 11111001 111011 11101011 11010101 100101 11111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 764 |
Words | 151 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 21 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 606 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 131 |
About this poem
Last goodbye and aftermath of my life after our dreadful Amsterdam fall.
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Written on December 20, 2022
Submitted by elxaelania on December 20, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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