Analysis of Amsterdam fall



We parted up in Amsterdam fall,
bicycles and foggy rooftop,
sneaking sun through the curtains of tangerine clouds.
Lone boats, pink shades,
you with all the colors i can only dream about,
my side was black and white
with the fringe of pink coral,
mixed up with your rainbow shades left me colorless behind.
You snubbed me in the filthiest state,
last night everything was great,
How easily you forget our bowling date nights.
Late December, freezing eve,
Under Christmas tree when we kissed,
skate nights, New year feast,
near hearths, when your arms around me.
Bring me back my magical time,
Snubbed me,the reason ain't me,
with green eyes contrasting own speech.
We parted up in Amsterdam fall,
foliage and shredded heart,
It's June but my hands are still cold.


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 764
Words 151
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 606
Words per stanza (avg) 131

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Last goodbye and aftermath of my life after our dreadful Amsterdam fall.

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Written on December 20, 2022

Submitted by elxaelania on December 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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