Analysis of Be my sky
Sargidataara 2004 (Raipur)
I wanted to see you as the moon,
Like all these poets and writers do.
They its beauty in their lovers,
Trust me I see it in you too!
But I don't want you to leave,
As the night falls into a new day.
I don't want to wait for a night,
For you to find your way.
I want you to be my sky,
Always there through days and nights,
Through colors and darkness,
Through rainbows and starlights.
Be my sky and everything under it.
You're not my moon or maybe
I'm not a good poet.
| Scheme | XABA XCXC XXXB XXX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 110111101 111100101 11100110 11111011 1111111 101101011 11111101 111111 1111111 111101 110010 1101 111010101 1111110 110110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 470 |
| Words | 113 |
| Sentences | 7 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 3 |
| Lines Amount | 15 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 88 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
We've read many poems of poets describing their loved ones as the moon but I can never see my love as the moon knowing that the moon just stays for the night and vanishes in the morning.
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Written on December 05, 2022
Submitted by sargidataara on December 11, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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