Analysis of Portrait



I sit with my canvas, twirling brush in my fingers.
Thoughts of painting your portrait, but yet my hand lingers.
Green for your eyes? But it cannot say
all the thoughts and emotions that those eyes convey.
Pink skin soft, like the petal of a rose,
Sweet and fragrant when I hold you close.
What colors should I use for that radiant smile?
That it warms my soul and lifts worries for awhile.
Wheat gold that shimmers like the breeze in your hair.
That silk beneath my fingers makes my spirits soar the air.
I could paint your picture and have some call it art.
But it wouldn't be the image that embraces my heart.
For an artist's brush can never see,
all the things you are to me.
Love, devotion, hope and life;
you, my beloved wife.


Scheme AABBCDEEFFGGHHII
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101010110 1110110111110 111111101 101001011101 1111010101 101011111 110111111001 111110110101 11110101011 11011101110101 111110011111 11101010101011 111011101 1011111 1010101 11011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 734
Words 152
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 571
Words per stanza (avg) 138

About this poem

I wrote this poem for my wife on our anniversary.

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Written on August 04, 2022

Submitted by lilziz on December 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Peter F. Zelinsky

Been writing poetry since high school. A long time...lol Been married for 40 years. more…

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