Analysis of The Gloom of my Room
Did he know how much it’d hurt when he left
How would he know about the theft
The theft he did as he left the room
Filled me with so much gloom
Theft of time , theft of love
Theft of patience and me left unloved
All i wished is for a happy end
But didnt know he had no time to lend
The lights of your room ,The mirror on that wall
Makes me wonder , If i were ever yours
You told me You’d call me back
Call back once the term resumed
Would i ever assume
I was being fooled
The calls, The texts, The letter
Makes me go sweet and bitter
The wrappers of your candies
Still lie in the litter
Did he know about my heart
Which shattered as he threw the dart
The dart which broke me apart
Guess i'll never be able to restart
Did he know about the theft
Theft of time, theft of love
Theft of patience and me left unloved
By
Anushree Mannur
| Scheme | aabbcDeefghibjkklkmmmmacDnk |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1111111111 11110101 011111101 111111 111111 111001101 111110101 111111111 01111010111 1110110101 1111111 1110101 111001 11101 0101010 1111010 0101110 110010 1110111 11011101 0111101 1110110101 1110101 111111 111001101 1 11 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 834 |
| Words | 171 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 27 |
| Lines Amount | 27 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 649 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 173 |
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Written on December 30, 2022
Submitted by anushreemannur.capitol on December 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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