Analysis of WAR

David Inch 1954 (Kingston)



Pistols rifles cannons tanks
Bombs grenades and missles
All the means to kill a man
With all the bells and whistles

Hitler putin mao and ung
Just to name a few
Greed and power for domination
They stick together like glue

Nuclear Bombs and chemicals
Ways to erase mankind
What more we need to eradicate
And leave this world behind

Battle ships submarines Aircraft carriers
All nuclear warhead equipped
Bombers fighters and unmanned drones
Leaving towns and cities stripped

What can we do to end all war
Hold hands and cry for peace
Embrace your neighbors from other lands
    And make the fighting cease

Why can't we all just get along
The way that God intended
Leave the hate and suffering behind
Without having to feel offended


Scheme AAXB XCXC BDXD XEXE XFXF XGDG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 1010101 10101 1011101 1101010 101101 11101 10101010 1101011 10010100 110111 11111010 011101 101101100 1100101 10100011 1010101 11111111 110111 011101101 010101 11111101 0111010 101010001 011011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 742
Words 135
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Listening to the news from around the world every day and the number of people or countries at war is staggering and not getting any better . This inspired me to write this poem.

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Written on June 20, 2022

Submitted by Corsairpilot47 on December 13, 2022

Modified on April 14, 2023

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David Inch

Born and raised mostly in Ontario Canada. Lived in the Philippines for 6 years and then returned to Canada but to British Columbia, where i live with my wife. more…

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