Analysis of Empathy Unexpected (for homeless ones)

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



Why am I in their corner?

Homeless people, hoboes

Tent City folk.

City must recover the land.

Many see shiftlessness

Police passing by.

Barber Collins on hire

Water, warmth, waste?

But I have met some

They are sincere

And problems not far fetched.

Mortgages pressing in.

Simple turn of the screw.

Mental faculties tested.

Now, presto, homeless.

Coins tossed in their box.

Grocery cart stuffed

A CITY coming to be.

Mourning dove overhead.

Could it have been me?

They desire place, peace, purpose.

City has chances here

To honour and help.

Common folk as well

Must not forget the

Who need more

Than some gymnasium floor.

And Mother in tears.


Scheme A B X X B X A X X X X X X X C X X D X D C X X X X E E X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110 101010 1101 10101001 1011 01101 1010110 1011 11111 1101 010111 100100 101101 1010010 1110 11011 10011 0101011 101101 11111 10101110 101101 1101 10111 11010 111 1101001 01001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 873
Words 195
Sentences 30
Stanzas 28
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 18
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on January 09, 2023

Submitted by dougb.72572 on January 09, 2023

Modified by dougb.72572 on January 09, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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